Roger_Murdock
Active Member
@albin Also, "decieve"? Remember the rhyme.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/I_before_E_except_after_C
Plus, "fud"? As an acronym, shouldn't that be written in all capitals?
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fear,_uncertainty_and_doubt
And "rizun"?
That should be capitalized.
Also, "well funded"? It's being used as a compound adjective there, so it should really be hyphenated.
http://www.grammarbook.com/punctuation/hyphens.asp
I'd also have used a comma after that "At the end of the day" because it's a fairly long introductory phrase and there's a natural pause, but now I feel like I'm just nitpicking...
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/I_before_E_except_after_C
Plus, "fud"? As an acronym, shouldn't that be written in all capitals?
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fear,_uncertainty_and_doubt
And "rizun"?
That should be capitalized.
Also, "well funded"? It's being used as a compound adjective there, so it should really be hyphenated.
http://www.grammarbook.com/punctuation/hyphens.asp
I'd also have used a comma after that "At the end of the day" because it's a fairly long introductory phrase and there's a natural pause, but now I feel like I'm just nitpicking...