I made the decision to capitalize the B in Blockchain because that is the convention we decided upon for articles in Ledger. The logic was that if the word "blockchain" was acting as a proper noun it should be capitalized, and if it was acting as a regular noun it should not be. There wasn't really a strong opinion either way on this one, however. More details:
Regarding @VeritasSapere proposed changes:
First paragraph:
- I prefer "monetary system" to "monetary protocol" because monetary system is already a widely-understood term and I think we want to piggy-back off this.
- I strongly prefer "unforgeable" to "unforgettable" because the second doesn't make sense to me.
- Capitalization: I aesthetically prefer no capitalization but I logically prefer capitalization. I don't have a strong opinion.
Second paragraph:
- I like all of these changes.
Third paragraph:
- I like the first change.
- I am mixed on whether the new sentence should be added (not strongly opposed or strongly for).
Regarding @VeritasSapere proposed changes:
First paragraph:
- I prefer "monetary system" to "monetary protocol" because monetary system is already a widely-understood term and I think we want to piggy-back off this.
- I strongly prefer "unforgeable" to "unforgettable" because the second doesn't make sense to me.
- Capitalization: I aesthetically prefer no capitalization but I logically prefer capitalization. I don't have a strong opinion.
Second paragraph:
- I like all of these changes.
Third paragraph:
- I like the first change.
- I am mixed on whether the new sentence should be added (not strongly opposed or strongly for).